How to Write Your News Release
by: George Torok
Follow this stepbystep process to write and expose your news.
Format
Call it a กNews Releaseก, กNews Bulletinก or กAnnouncementก. กPress Releaseก sounds like propaganda.
Add, กFor immediate useก. This implies urgency. It also allows them some choice on when to run it. If the news is date sensitive state กfor use beforeก or กfor use afterก.
Fax or mail? If urgent fax. But to get noticed mail it. They get a lot of junk mail and junk fax. The fax junk looks too much alike. If you mail it you have a chance to get attention with the colour and feel of the paper. Send it on good quality paper with your logo. That could be your letterhead.
Don’t address it to กnewsroomก or กeditorก. Thatกs the same as กoccupantก. Instead address it to a person. Get their name.
Make it easy to read. Maximum one page. Use easy to read font. Twelve point size Times Roman works well. Add a little spice by bolding key names but sprinkle lightly. Italics draws attention but is hard to read. Use capitals and small letters don’t print the whole thing in capital letters. That is extremely difficult to read. Keep paragraphs and sentences short. Double spacing is best.
Make it clear whom the release is from. Lead with city and date of the release. This gives perspective. At the bottom of the page state, ‘the endก or ก 30ก Show contact name(s) and phone number(s) clearly at the bottom or top of the page.
Make sure those contacts receive a copy of the release and that they will be available and prepared to talk to the press when called. Impress on those contacts that the press need speedy responses to make their deadlines.
Content
Start with a strong title. A subtitle is not necessary if the title is strong. Study newspaper headings for ideas. Examine the style of the target media you are trying to reach to get ideas.
You have only one chance to hook them with the title. If you do not, they will not read any further. One glance at the headline is how they preview the release. There must be words, themes, companies, personalities or issues in the title that slows their glance enough to invite them to read the first paragraph.
The first sentence must grab them. Rework that first sentence until the first few words or even the first word pulls the reader in.
The first paragraph is important. It should contain your most important message. If they read that far it is what draws them into the story. Write that first paragraph as if that might be the only paragraph they print.
Follow with the next points in order of decreasing importance. Assume that they might chop it after any paragraph. Write each paragraph applying the same approach to your sentences. If they only print one sentence make that the first sentence.
Good news releases are not written , they are rewritten and rewritten.
Make it easy to read. Maximum one page. Use easy to read font. Twelve point works well. Add a little spice by bolding key names but sprinkle lightly. Italics draws attention but is hard to read. Use capitals and small letters don’t print the whole thing in capital letters. That is extremely hard to read. Use many short paragraphs and short sentences. Double spacing is a very good idea.
Proof read before you send it. Journalists are especially sensitive to poor grammar and typos. It hurts to read garbage so they won’t.
The media will read your release thinking, กWill this interest my readers, listeners or viewers and is it unique?ก It doesn’t have to be กveryก unique just a little. Every January we get news about the first News Yearกs baby. Because the first one is unique at that time, the second is not news.
Relate the news to the reader. Why is it important to the readers, listeners, or viewers of the media? Test for significance by asking, กSo what?ก
Answer a reporterกs key questions: who, what, why, where, when and how. You could even use these questions as sub headings or as a summary. Use these questions as a quality test before you send it.
Quotes are good and more interesting. You might use quotes from company officials, community leaders or customers. When you use a name always state who they are, e.g. National Sales Manager, President and Founder, author of… Use quotes that evoke emotion, create controversy or present a position.
Don’t introduce too many new names. This confuses readers. Talk about one or two.
Write the name in full the first time you use it. After that you can use only the last name. If you want a name to be remembered use it several times in the release.
After the Release
The reporter(s) may call for more information or to arrange a photograph. Be available. If you are out of the office check your voice messages often. The press has tight deadlines.
Don’t expect to review the reporterกs article before publication. Occasionally they will run the article exactly the way you wrote it but not often. Once you give them the information they have control. It helps if you have read other articles from the reporter and know their slant and hot buttons.
If they use your news release, send them a thank you note.
Keep and file all your news releases in sequence even the ones that did not get action. Clip and save the articles that ran with the release. Study them to find what works with whom and when.
See you in the news!
About The Author
© George Torok is coauthor of the national bestseller, กSecrets of Power Marketingก, Canadaกs first guide to personal marketing for กnonmarketersก. He delivers seminars & keynotes to corporations and associations across North America. You can reach him at 8003041861 For more information about seminars and more marketing tips visit www.torok.com
[email protected]
This article was posted on February 17
by George Torok
